by Writing Shark
Your daughters have a sleepover
Finally, the weekend is here. Alice is all excited and Mrs. Hoover had to call her to order in her class because she wasn’t paying attention. Elise felt the same way at school and couldn’t wait to pack her things and leave her mother alone for the weekend.
While Elise was saying goodbye (surely not) to her mother, Alice went to her father, kissed him and offered him her little butt. It’s important to her that her daddy knows she can take the pain and that he can count on her. Her heart beats with joy as he kisses her on the forehead, pushes her thighs apart and drives her crazy with his tongue in her cunny. The two make love quickly and tenderly and this time it is Alice who comes while James holds back.
“You’re mine Muffin” her father whispers in her ear. “Everyone knows that.” Then a quick kiss follows and the matter is settled.
A short time later, the doorbell rings and Alice opens the door for her best friend. Elise is shocked by the scale of the house and the amount of money Mr Winters has invested in his family.
“Holy crap Mister” she exclaims when she sees the big TV in the living room. “You could sleep on that.” Alice giggles, but nudges Elise in the side. She notices the deprecating look on the man’s face. “Oh…” she mutters, “Sorry.” She doesn’t notice Alice looking at her father too, admiration in her eyes. No one has ever seen Elise Schoomer so controlled.
“That’s okay Elise. But I don’t like people swearing in my house.” Elise nods quickly. She doesn’t want to lose his favor right away. “Alice show you the house and where everything is. Leave your things here, I’ll take them to your room.”
“Thank you Mister Winters.”
“And take a good look at my daughter. Learn from her. She’s a good girl.” He smiles at Elise in a way that makes her stomach go light. “And you want to be a good girl in my house.”
“Yes Mister Winters.” Then the man nods and Alice pulls her friend out of the room.
“That went well” Elise moans annoyed. “Shit… Oh crap. I mean…” She looks at her friend. “How am I going to do this?” The two sit in the tree house, a place where they are undisturbed. Elise doesn’t notice the looks of her friend.
“You’ll be fine,” Alice comforts her, partly to distract herself from the wonderful memories. “You can see that you really like daddy. And he knows you’re trying hard. That’s the most important thing to him.”
“Daddy?” asks Elise, grinning cheekily. “You know how that sounds?” But Alice is smarter, better, all thanks to her father. She knows Elise wants to change the subject to avoid embarrassment.
“Yeah,” Alice giggles, looking at Elise proudly. “So what? Only I get to call my father that because I’m a perfect daughter for him. I do what he says, when he says it, and how he says it. For that, I get to call him that. It’s a reward and I had to earn it.”
“So I’d better not call him that?” giggles Elise but Alice knows better. She shakes her head.
“He’d be very angry about that. Gemma did it once and he spanked her until she cried.” The other girl’s eyes widen.
“Your dad did what?”
“In our family there are only a few rules and they are very simple” explains Alice who knows what her dad told her to say. “They are easy to remember and carry out. And if you don’t follow them then the consequences are yours alone.” Elise looks at her friend doubtfully.
“I don’t know Alice,” she murmurs.
“But I know” attacks the girl. “And you know it too. You can’t tell me you don’t want that too.”
“Obey a strange man? Just like that?” But Elise sees that the words are all wrong and Alice looks at her not angrily but compassionately.
“We both know you have a crush on my father.”
“That was just a cliché…” But Alice shakes her head.
“Daddy doesn’t ask much of me. Obedience, faithfulness and honesty. And I get so much in return.” And Elise admits the truth.
“What?” She wants it too, needs it. Alice knows it through her father, the wishes Elise herself does not know.
“The thing you’ve always wanted. A father for whom you are everything. A protector for whom you matter. A leader to guide you. And someone for whom you are the most beautiful girl in the world. There’s nothing my daddy wouldn’t do for me, and I love him for it.” At first Elise is very quiet, thinking for a long time and Alice gives her time.
“I want that too,” the lost girl then murmurs. “But I’m so stupid in this regard. I’m always sassy and snippy and opinionated. And then your dad always looks at me so disappointed and angry. How do you do it?” Alice is proud, of herself and of James, who told her Elise will go it alone, as she has. “You always say the right thing and you always get rewarded.”
“It must be hard not having a father” Alice helps her friend along.
“Yeah damn” the girl moans annoyed and sad. “And always I see you and… him.” Her voice softens, Alice knows what her friend is thinking. Then their eyes meet. “You… you l… you like him too, don’t you?” Without her father, Alice would be lost now but he helped her.
“What daughter would fall for her own father?” she says but her tone says otherwise. Elise can’t have it too easy. If her father wants her friend, he’ll get her. But the way he wants it, not Elise. And her father wants Elise to earn her place. “But at least now we know where you stand.” She grins cheekily but this time Elise doesn’t deny it.
“It’s just unfair that you’re so lucky and I’m not. If I had someone like your dad too, then maybe I’d be…you know.”
“You have to say it yourself,” Alice admonishes her. “Daddy would want you to. Admit it to yourself.”
And Elise does. Much faster than Alice would have thought.
My daddy is irresistible. He’ll be so proud of me when I bring her to him.
“I want to be a good girl too. I want to be rewarded and recognized and flattered.” She looks at her friend. “I want someone to look at me the way your dad looks at you. I just don’t know how to make that happen.”
And Alice is at her destination. She has made her friend admit her desires. Alice is proud that she has recognized her longing for her father herself. Now her daddy wants a new girl and Alice has made his goal to take the step Alice has already taken. It feels good to obey her daddy and she can look forward to the reward he has for her. She only has to say a few more sentences to bind Elise to her daddy forever.
“You are my best friend Elise. And I want you to be happy. I know how great it is to have someone like my daddy.” Then just one last point and Elise belongs to her daddy. “Do you want me to help you with that?”
The answer is clear to Alice, Elise and, of course, James.
As the two friends fall into each other’s arms in the tree house, they don’t realize they are being overheard.
Writing Shark 